Super Short Story 6

The final goodbye

The final goodbye


4 thoughts on “Super Short Story 6

  1. Brilliant thoughts on how a relationship has evolved…and commencing at a poignant end…but adding a few more lines in between would enrich it. Not clear now if this is a mother-child bond, or a husband-wife bond 🙂


    • Thanks a lot, Ipsita. It’s actually the internal struggle of a man, torn with the thought of choosing, between his mother and his wife. I guess that the story is a tad too metaphorical, since I’m getting feedback that most readers can’t make head or tail of what’s going on.


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